the precedent was set by adam
you come to mewith your mouth likea starving personand i fill you upi have always filled you upyou keep pluckingbut my orchards arenot enchantedso i say goodbye to you in your skinand our warm little...
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oh i love the brevity and sharpness of this.hope you stick around...
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hello cinn,this is tight and well worded and the titleis perfect for what it is about-- you have a fine voice.and it is nice to see you~D~
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i like this too. drawn in by the title, and the poem delivers. regardsedenNavel Orange
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cinn,absolutely beautiful. love the idea of love being blind, in a sense -- being oblivious to everything else, like Adam & Eve before knowledge of sin. great write.take care.
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I love it, Cinn.So hapy to read something by you again!hugs,kerri
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thanks for all your nice replies east/wester's. i'll try to stop by more often. it would be nice if i could write more too, but...Tammy it's funny, i was meaning to say how guys are all idiots (sorry...
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Leave it to Tammy to be so positive Ha...I think I can see it both ways, and appreciate both. Is nice to see everyone here.A nice, tight write, Cinn.
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thanks Christine.i have to say again how i appreciate the positive spin. Tammy is obviously a more natural optimist than i am.
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i like the the slant rhyme in the last couplet - a good strong way to end. the others are right - it is a great title. my favorite stanza it's that middle one. i think lots of men take for granted how...
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